Hey Bloggers,
For the school holidays I will be doing the Holiday Blogging Challenge. I have done the first activity which is about the game interland. Its not just any game. It is a educational game which teaches you what type of information you should give online.
Anyways Here Is My Presentation
Hope You Enjoyed Looking And Reading My Blog.
Please Remember To Give Me Some Feedback On My Writing So That Next Time I Will Have A Better And Improved Piece Of Writing
Thank You
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Hi there Fatimah
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed going through your slides. I think that you gave awesome advice to some kids who are going through this situation. Also remember to keep up the good work Fatimah. You should check out my blog https://wpsminervaf.blogspot.com/ because I am also doing the Holiday blogging:). Stay safe and Be Kind
- Minerva
Thank you Minerva,
DeleteI will check out your blog when I have some free time.
Thank you for the feedback.
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Kia ora Fatimah. I'm enjoyed reading your slides and I love how you're asking for feedback on your writing. It's good that you see the link between writing and other subjects. I think your sentences are great and I think some screenshots or images would help people understand the different worlds even better. I think the white writing on the green background was the trickiest to read so maybe use a darker green or another colour?
ReplyDeleteThank you Phil,
DeleteNext time I will try to add some pictures and images to help people understand the worlds in interland. I will also try to use good colors so that people can read the slideshows I put on my blog.
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Namaste Fatimah! Great work completing one of the holiday blogging challenges. Your slides were very informative - I wonder if you could give some more information about what makes a good password? Have you thought about how the messages in Interland and the Kawa of Care are connected? Next time it would be great if you could add some images that relate to your text so that your audience will be able to make a stronger connection to your very powerful messages.
ReplyDeleteThank You Mrs Eagleson,
DeleteI know what makes a good password and I have completed the challenges on interland. Yes I have thought about how the messages and kawa of care are connected.
I will try next time to add text so that my audience will be able to make a stronger connection to my very powerful messages.
Thank you
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